my first song

i am alive

i am alone again
in this cruel world
my faith is faning
my hopes are down

does life had to be this bad
do we have to be this Sad
but no i wont life this way
no i will survive
i am alive...i am alive ...i am alive


even though evryday is a batlle
evryday is a fight
i am alive... i am alive....i am alive

i tried to keep up
i tried to see past
but life never laught at me
life is like hell to me
me...me...me why always me
am i the only person standing

even though evryday is a battle
even though evryday there is war
but no i wont give up
yes i am alive
yes i will survive
i am alive ...i am alive...i am alive

my faith is faning == my faith is fading ... i guess you've forget the D

but life never laught at me == you have to take off the T



frankly speaking i m not that good to Assess your song

but i found it soo good and it Affects the feelings really it touched deeply
you are wonderful keep up go go go you have a A bright future in front ov you

pleaaaaase i want moooooore from you pleaase

keeeeeeeeeeep workyyyy i love you i suport you

perseverance and creativity Are two sides of one coin and this coin is

you amani





i love you you are my smarty girl of english